The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The graphs reveal the total
income
of Use synonyms
of
Fairtrade-labelled Remove the redundancy
apply
coffee
and bananas being sold from 1999 to 2004. It shows Use synonyms
Switzerland
had the highest Use synonyms
income
from Use synonyms
coffee
in 1999 and Use synonyms
then
it change to Linking Words
Use synonyms
UK
in 2004. In Correct article usage
the UK
bananas
Correct article usage
the bananas
sales
table, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
hold
the highest profit for over 5 years.
In 1999, Change the verb form
holds
Switzerland
stood at the top in selling Use synonyms
coffee
with Use synonyms
the
profit Correct article usage
a
about
3 Change preposition
of about
Use synonyms
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
Change preposition
apply
euros
Use synonyms
while
Sweden had Linking Words
a
disastrous Correct article usage
apply
sales
Use synonyms
only
0.8 Change preposition
of only
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
euros
. But in 2004, Use synonyms
Switzerland
only doubled Use synonyms
the
Change the word
its
sales
Use synonyms
with
6 Change preposition
by
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
euros
and had Use synonyms
been
passed by Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
UK
with Correct article usage
the UK
outstanding
result of 20 Add an article
an outstanding
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
euros
. Come Use synonyms
to
Denmark in 1999, Change preposition
apply
this
country had 1.8 Linking Words
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
euros
from Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
sales
only placed after Use synonyms
Switzerland
and it not had any significant Use synonyms
changed
in the next 5 years. Same with Belgium and Sweden with the Replace the word
changes
income
not even passed 1 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
millions
.
In banana Change to a singular noun
million
sales
, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
UK
hold the highest Correct article usage
the UK
income
with 15 million Use synonyms
euros
Use synonyms
while
Belgium only had 0.6 Linking Words
Use synonyms
millions
Change to singular
million
at
1999. Over 5 years, Change preposition
in
Use synonyms
UK
still hold the first place with Correct article usage
the UK
humongous
47 Correct article usage
a humongous
Use synonyms
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
euros
of banana Use synonyms
sales
higher than Use synonyms
sale
of other countries combined. In Add an article
the sale
a sale
this
year, Linking Words
Switzerland
had Use synonyms
also
increased Linking Words
it
Change the pronoun
its
income
5 times to reach 5.5 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
millions
and Belgium stood in the middle with 4 million Change to singular
million
euros
. And two other countries Use synonyms
were
Sweden and Denmark had to take a severe drop in banana Unnecessary verb
apply
sale
with each Fix the agreement mistake
sales
countries
Change to a singular noun
country
dropped
Wrong verb form
dropping
at
an Change preposition
apply
approximately
Change the adverb
approximate
number of
1 million Correct quantifier usage
apply
euros
Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, coffee, switzerland, uk, sales, millions, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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