The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The graphs reveal the total
income
of of
Fairtrade-labelled Remove the redundancy
apply
coffee
and bananas being sold from 1999 to 2004. It shows Switzerland
had the highest income
from coffee
in 1999 and then
it change to UK
in 2004. In Correct article usage
the UK
bananas
Correct article usage
the bananas
sales
table, UK
Correct article usage
the UK
hold
the highest profit for over 5 years.
In 1999, Change the verb form
holds
Switzerland
stood at the top in selling coffee
with the
profit Correct article usage
a
about
3 Change preposition
of about
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
Change preposition
apply
euros
while
Sweden had a
disastrous Correct article usage
apply
sales
only
0.8 Change preposition
of only
millions
Change to singular
million
euros
. But in 2004, Switzerland
only doubled the
Change the word
its
sales
with
6 Change preposition
by
millions
Change to singular
million
euros
and had been
passed by Unnecessary verb
apply
UK
with Correct article usage
the UK
outstanding
result of 20 Add an article
an outstanding
millions
Change to singular
million
euros
. Come to
Denmark in 1999, Change preposition
apply
this
country had 1.8 millions
Change to singular
million
euros
from coffee
sales
only placed after Switzerland
and it not had any significant changed
in the next 5 years. Same with Belgium and Sweden with the Replace the word
changes
income
not even passed 1 millions
.
In banana Change to a singular noun
million
sales
, UK
hold the highest Correct article usage
the UK
income
with 15 million euros
while
Belgium only had 0.6 millions
Change to singular
million
at
1999. Over 5 years, Change preposition
in
UK
still hold the first place with Correct article usage
the UK
humongous
47 Correct article usage
a humongous
millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
euros
of banana sales
higher than sale
of other countries combined. In Add an article
the sale
a sale
this
year, Switzerland
had also
increased it
Change the pronoun
its
income
5 times to reach 5.5 millions
and Belgium stood in the middle with 4 million Change to singular
million
euros
. And two other countries were
Sweden and Denmark had to take a severe drop in banana Unnecessary verb
apply
sale
with each Fix the agreement mistake
sales
countries
Change to a singular noun
country
dropped
Wrong verb form
dropping
at
an Change preposition
apply
approximately
Change the adverb
approximate
number of
1 million Correct quantifier usage
apply
euros
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, coffee, switzerland, uk, sales, millions, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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