The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. What extent do you agree or disagree?

There are those who think that deciding stricter punishments against accidents on pathways is only a method to reduce car crimes. In my opinion, I partially disagree with

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view, and the reason will be elaborated in enlisted paragraphs.

Firstly

, let us think about a beneficial point of

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fact that if the punishment becomes harder than in the past, car drivers would beware how to drive more, and it will generate some positive effects on walkers and bikers.

For instance

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government enacted more severe laws against car

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in 2018, and the number of

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accidents diminished from 2018 to 2020, and

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is because many

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have to concentrate on driving to avoid expensive

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.

Hence

, harsh rules would evoke the individuals’ caution more.

However

, perhaps

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should not be the case. After all,

although

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decide

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strict penalties for

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offences, many people would be used to

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under the severe guidelines.

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, they may obtain nervous and

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from the rules, and it would produce more accidents.

According to

the dissertation done in 2020, one of the main reasons

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the crimes on pathways is stress from driving and other things.

In addition

, they would drive slower, and it triggers traffic congestion,

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the traffic jam generates adverse impacts on the citizens who used

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.

Thus

, harsh penalties would make an increase

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vehicle crimes. In conclusion, though making more strict punishments has the advantage, there are more disadvantages than

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positive

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point.

Therefore

, I slightly disagree with

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statement.