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You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the Head of Department to change your course. In your letter, explain: what course you are doing now why you are not satisfied with that course  what course you would like to change to  Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, With due respect my name is Raman. I am studying a new short-term plan at your college. I am writing
this
 letter because I want to change
this
 course immediately because my classes are running daily. As I previously mentioned that I want to advance that line when I am admitted to that college. I did not know how
this
 was continuously
as well as
 beneficial for me.
Moreover
, yes, my friend is providing relevant knowledge about
this
 way. Unfortunately, my previous study does not relate to
this
 procedure. I think it's just a waste of money and
also
 time.
Therefore
, I want to transform it. I would highly request you that please give me permission to modify the series.
Furthermore
, I should choose the course
according to
 my choice and own my first degree. I want to complete a D- Pharmacy at that college I hope you will understand my situation and agree with me. I am really excited and heard that you will take action as soon as possible. Yours truly, Rachana
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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