The three pie charts give the details of transition of expenditure collected by local government in Someland each year in terms of 6 important categories over the period in question.
The three pie charts give the details of
transition
of expenditure collected by Correct article usage
the transition
local
government in Someland each year in terms of 6 important categories over the period in question.
Correct article usage
the local
It is clear that
Someland authorities spent the largest proportion of their budget on higher education in all given years. Moreover
, the least spending was on other things.
The outgoing for higher education accounted for 45% in 1990 and the figures for this
category were 35% in 1980 and 40% by the time 2000. Furthermore
, the expenditure on K-12 Education shows 25% in 1980 and it stood at twenty per cent in 1980 and accounted for 18 per cent in 2000. The figures were relatively similar with health and human resources, 14%, 20% and 10% respectively.The local authorities spent the
large amount of money on transportation, these stood at 16%, 6% and 22% over the period.The government spent on environmental services approximately half more Change the article
a
that
other things. The Correct word choice
than
last
realm was other
spending proves the least popular items.Change the wording
another
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