The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.

The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.
The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question. As is shown by the charts
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Computer science shows an upward trend in all given years.
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, the grants for the field of law
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the least popular among other professions. In 2010, the proportion of computer science accounted for exactly
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half per cent ,
while
the percentages were slightly lower in 1990 and 2000, at 40% and just under
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per cent.
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fields,
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Medicine and Business had approximately similar percentages. These figures were one out of four per cent and 30% in 1990.
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year 2000, the figures for these categories were three in ten and a mere 20%. By
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2010, the proportion of these two spheres
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a quarter and a modest 15%. Regarding the law, the rate proves that was the least popular major at the National University
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  • gender distribution
  • equality
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