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Graph chart of the emission of carbon dioxide in developed countries

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The bar graph gives information on some decisions that people can make that have a large influence on reducing greenhouse effects. From an
overall
 perspective, it is readily apparent that
while
 most of these acts are still a major step to overcoming
this
 problem, some still work better than others. To start, it is visible on the chart that five main actions can help decrease pollution, these include avoiding driving a car, purchasing green energy, transforming your diet into a plant-based one, recycling used products, and staying away from one transatlantic trip every year. From the median values for developed countries, it is understandable that living without an automobile is the leading move, followed by buying renewable resources and keeping away from one yearly visit abroad, which are not quite the same but have a similar number of around 1.5. Next up is going vegetarian which appears to be almost half of the ones mentioned before.
Additionally
, recycling stands at around 0.2 with the lowest of all five in annual climate savings.
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