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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Wasting a lot of
food
 that was bought from
shops
 and
restaurants
 is becoming more widespread in many parts of the world these days.
This
 essay will examine the factors
as well as
 some measures
could
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that could
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 be taken to improve the situation. There are a variety of different causes for
this
 matter.
To begin
 with,
people
 often cannot deny the attraction of
food
, drink, or stuff. Nowadays,
besides
 the main course, there are many kinds of
dessert
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desserts
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,
snacks
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and snacks
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 that can easily get from supermarkets or
shops
. Trending content about
food
 on social media is more popular,
that
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which
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 is affected
to
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by
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individual’s
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an individual’s
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 choice.
People
 tend to be interested in trying new foods.
For example
, I used to purchase 2 packs of snacks, that I have seen on a Youtube channel just for tasting,
then
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and then
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 I have to throw away some bags that are expired because I don’t have time to eat
all
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them all
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. Another contributing factor to mention is that
people
 do not plan for what they need. Sometimes,
people
 just come to
shops
by
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apply
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spontaneous
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spontaneously
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 though, they choose whatever seems attractive to them. Despite
of
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apply
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these circumstances, there are several actions that individuals could take to solve the problems.
Firstly
,
a
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an
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 effective solution would be to list the quantity of
food
 or essential stuff that they plan to buy,
then
 just follow that list. Buying what they need, not what they want. The second measure is
the
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that
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restaurants
,
shops
 should create more policies or conditions
involed
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involved
involve
using
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in using
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food
.
For example
, in some buffet
restaurants
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,restaurants
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 they have a policy about the quantity of
food
. If customers took a lot of
food
 but did not use it, it would be extra charged in
bill
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the bill
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. In conclusion, wasting a lot of
food
 that was bought from
shops
 or
restaurants
 is a big problem nowadays.
However
, various actions can be taken to tackle the issue of reducing the amount of
food
is
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that is
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throw
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thrown
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 away
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