The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These pie charts illustrate the average consumption of
breakfast
,
lunch
,
dinner
and
snacks
considering the use of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar.
Additionally
, if some of them be overused,
definitely
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it is converted
to
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into
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unhealthy foods.
It is clear that
overall
, except for added sugar,
dinner
is the junkiest food,
while
breakfast
is the most healthy feed, compared with other meals.
According to
these data, the highest percentage of sodium is in binner with 43% and in the next place is
lunch
with 29%. The amount of sodium is equal to 14% of
snacks
and
breakfast
.
Moreover
, the first place of saturated fat use is
dinner
with 37%
then
lunch
stay
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in
second
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stage with 26%. there was about 21% and 16% consumption of saturated fat in
snacks
and
breakfast
.
In addition
,
in contrast
to the previous method added sugar
snacks
have the top percentage among other meals with 42%.
Besides
,
breakfast
meals are the lowest rate in England with 16%. 23% and 19% are for the proportion of
lunch
and
dinner
respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words breakfast, lunch, dinner, snacks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average percentages
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • meal
  • typical meals
  • categories
  • high percentage
  • distribution
  • patterns
  • trends
  • nutrient-dense
  • data
  • comparison
  • summarize
  • reporting main features
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