The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These pie charts illustrate the average consumption of

breakfast

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lunch

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dinner

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and

snacks

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considering the use of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar.

Additionally

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, if some of them be overused,

definitely

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they definitely

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it is converted

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into

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unhealthy foods.

It is clear that

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overall

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, except for added sugar,

dinner

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is the junkiest food,

while

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breakfast

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is the most healthy feed, compared with other meals.

According to

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these data, the highest percentage of sodium is in binner with 43% and in the next place is

lunch

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with 29%. The amount of sodium is equal to 14% of

snacks

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and

breakfast

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Moreover

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, the first place of saturated fat use is

dinner

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with 37%

then

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lunch

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stay

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stays

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second

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the second

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stage with 26%. there was about 21% and 16% consumption of saturated fat in

snacks

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and

breakfast

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In addition

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in contrast

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to the previous method added sugar

snacks

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have the top percentage among other meals with 42%.

Besides

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breakfast

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meals are the lowest rate in England with 16%. 23% and 19% are for the proportion of

lunch

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and

dinner

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respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words breakfast, lunch, dinner, snacks with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

174 words

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