There have been some problem with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter . Describe the problems . Explain how these problems are affecting the public . Suggest what changes could be made
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to report about some transport systems problem at Cherry station.
A couple of months ago, I was late for work because your bus
came late to the station. I live in Cherry which is a rural area in Korea. Usually, the bus
schedules have only 5 times so if I miss the bus
, I have to wait for 2 hours to take a bus
. It is very uncomfortable for commuters ,especially some people who have to go to the urban area.
It is a very important factor for commuters. When they go to work at 9am, they should take a bus
right away. If they do not get on the bus
at the correct time, they have to use a Uber, so it is fairly waste of money and energy to them.
To address this
problem, I strongly recommend that you can make more bus
schedule and provide various transfer vehicles to citizens.
I am looking forward to getting good news from your bus
company and using the extended bus
schedule.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Hwi Ju Jin.Submitted by gnlwnww on
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