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There have been some problem with public transport in your area recently. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter . Describe the problems . Explain how these problems are affecting the public . Suggest what changes could be made

#transport #area #manager #company #changes
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to report about some transport systems problem at Cherry station. A couple of months ago, I was late for work because your
bus
 came late to the station. I live in Cherry which is a rural area in Korea. Usually, the
bus
 schedules have only 5 times so if I miss the
bus
, I have to wait for 2 hours to take a
bus
. It is very uncomfortable for commuters ,especially some people who have to go to the urban area. It is a very important factor for commuters. When they go to work at 9am, they should take a
bus
 right away. If they do not get on the
bus
 at the correct time, they have to use a Uber, so it is fairly waste of money and energy to them. To address
this
 problem, I strongly recommend that you can make more
bus
 schedule and provide various transfer vehicles to citizens. I am looking forward to getting good news from your
bus
 company and using the extended
bus
 schedule. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Hwi Ju Jin.
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