Envionment damage is the problem of most countries. What factors damage the environment and who should take responsibility?

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It is certainly true that global
environment
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damage issues are rapidly increasing in many nations. There are several
reasons
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for
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problem
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, and I believe that individuals and
government
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should take responsibility
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problem
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, there
is
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a numerous
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reasons
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. One of the major factors can be that
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lot of vehicles on our streets is increasingly growing these days.
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it causes harmful air pollution
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our atmosphere.
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reasons
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can be that human activities trigger to rise of
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green house
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greenhouse
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gases
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as burning fossil fuel or oil for energy.
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means that it causes
global
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temperature to dramatically rise which is
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negative
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on
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our planet. I believe that individuals and
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can solve
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this serious problems
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, individuals can reduce the usage of fossil
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fuels
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such
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as oil and gases.
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, they should adopt cleaner energy sources
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as solar and wind energy.
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i
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reckon developing eco-friendly habits
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this
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issues
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.
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, the
government
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also
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can play a significantly important role
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environment
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the environment
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.
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, They could impose
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as green taxes on their citizens who waste a lot of natural resources. In conclusion, there are many
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to damage our planet.
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, I
strongly
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convinced that
government
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and
individual
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individuals
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should work together to solve
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problem
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