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Band 5.5

A friend of yours is thinking of going on camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice Write a letter to your friend. In your letter . Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday . Describe some possible disadvantages . Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Tom I’m going to write
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 letter to give you
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 advice which will help you have a perfect camping holiday
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 summer. I suggest you should go to Ho Tri An Lake in Dong Nai since It has a huge space where you can back to nature to unwind and recharge your energy.
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, you will have a chance to get experience activities like trekking, kayak paddle, team building and so on.
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, there are some inconveniences at Ho Tri An.
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, if you go there, you have to ask local people around that to make sure that you will not lose the road even though you have a map in your hand.
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, There are a lot of insects
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 as mosquitoes.
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, you have to ensure that you bring
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coffee
 to protect yourself from it.
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 summer, I have a lot of new projects, I am afraid that I cannot arrange a time to go camping with you. I hope we will have a chance to go there for the next time I’m looking forward to receiving your feedback later soon Your best friend Tracy
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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