Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is widely argued that increasing the number of
industries
is essential for solving the problem of poverty, while
others believe that industrial growth is responsible for poor environmental conditions. This
essay agrees that industrial growth is much needed to solve the monetary problems of the poor because it will prove
employment to Verb problem
provide
people
in need; however
, some improvements in the overall
process are required.
On the one hand, industries
are capable of providing financial stability to people
by increasing job opportunities in an area as industries
will require labour in order to operate properly. As a result
, it will decrease the number of unemployed people
in that area. To aptly illustrate it, "Guru Gobin Singh Oil Refinery" is the prime example of this
because it provided jobs to more than 50,000 unemployed people
within its 20km radius.
Despite providing jobs, industries
also
contribute largely to the world's pollution. However
, there are some rules and regulations for pollution that are done by industries
but these industries
are able to find loopholes in the law and start abusing them for their benefit. For example
, Most of the toxic gases in the air come from such
industries
. Apart from
this
, these industries
are built on land which is usually a product of deforestation and increasing them will in turn promote deforestation, which is responsible for the extinction of many species of flora and fauna.
To conclude
, increasing industries
are able to decrease poverty by providing more jobs. At the same time, they will also
cause environmental damage. Thus
, I opine that there should be strict implementation of laws for the environment's safety when increasing industries
and all of this
should be done in a controlled manner.Submitted by arshpreetmalkana on
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