Many people say that globalization and growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

It is said that the environment has a number of negative effectual things

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globalization and

increasing

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large

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number of large

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factories. I completely agree with

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opinion.

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, the main reason

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my agreement is that urbanization and multinational companies are polluting the climate these days. Even though these factories do business across the world, globalization is not always beneficial to everyone. Global trade is becoming increasingly international. Some kind of leaders take permission from the government to build an office

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some places,

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of

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they cut the trees growing there.

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situation is

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related to urban areas. There are only a few plants

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cities.

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, the government should not allow to construct a factory on the field where perennial plants are growing.

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, it is useful that goods are

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produced

in one country and sold in many others, but it has a few drawbacks.

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, companies can move to

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the countryside

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where labour is cheap.

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,

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creates job losses.

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, if a manager cannot control the workersʼ safety, they may get sick in

unreliable

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surrounding

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surroundings

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.

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, employees working at a farm

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prodused

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produces

chicken meat could be harmed

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the bad smell of the hens.

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,

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unpleasant odour spreads over nature.

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is dangerous for citizens living in rural areas. So businessmen should think about

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ways which do not harm individuals. In conclusion,

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globalization is developing nowadays,our nature is suffering from the litter that mills are creating and cutting plants.