people living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional town?

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those

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individuals

are

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living in rural

areas

they

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suffer countless issues in their day-to-day life. The prominent problem is

that

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lack of job opportunities and

high

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the high

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rate of

apartment

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as people of the countryside are moving to big cities;

however

, the supreme need to organise companies in remote

areas

. Foremost, the fundamental obstacle of living in rural

areas

is that people are becoming jobless because the other

areas

of people migrate to big cities for earning huge amounts of money with

this

they are facing financial hurdles.

Besides

this

, the living

areas

is

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too expensive because the demand

of

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for

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flats is proliferating continuously

due to

overpopulation.

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, in Japan Tokyo city 75% of the crowd have unemployed because of their high population and in Shibuya ,street there are more expenses of living. Despite the above-mentioned problems, there are some solution

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the government should ensure city residents move to a small regional location

with

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by

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giving occupation to everyone.

Firslty

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Firstly

, it will help to reduce unemployment and

fulfill

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their basic needs by earning capital.

Finally

, the government should ensure city residents move to a small regional location.

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, it is an article published by The Tribune newspaper showed that approximately 65% of the population

of

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around the world have satisfied when they shift to

country side

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areas

.

To conclude

,

although

commoners may not

getting

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jobs

while

living in big cities and giving high rent to owners of apartments, it can be solved if higher authorities ought to open industries in

residentional

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residential

areas

, they would move to other

areas

and save money which

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on apartments.