people living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional town?
It is generally observed that
who
individuals Correct pronoun usage
those
are
living in rural Unnecessary verb
apply
areas
Use synonyms
they
suffer countless issues in their day-to-day life. The prominent problem is Correct pronoun usage
apply
that
lack of job opportunities and Correct determiner usage
the
high
rate of Correct article usage
the high
apartment
as people of the countryside are moving to big cities; Fix the agreement mistake
apartments
however
, the supreme need to organise companies in remote Linking Words
areas
.
Foremost, the fundamental obstacle of living in rural Use synonyms
areas
is that people are becoming jobless because the other Use synonyms
areas
of people migrate to big cities for earning huge amounts of money with Use synonyms
this
they are facing financial hurdles. Linking Words
Besides
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this
, the living Linking Words
areas
Use synonyms
is
too expensive because the demand Change the verb form
are
of
flats is proliferating continuously Change preposition
for
due to
overpopulation. Linking Words
For instance
, in Japan Tokyo city 75% of the crowd have unemployed because of their high population and in Shibuya ,street there are more expenses of living.
Despite the above-mentioned problems, there are some solution Linking Words
is
the government should ensure city residents move to a small regional location Unnecessary verb
apply
with
giving occupation to everyone. Change preposition
by
Firslty
, it will help to reduce unemployment and Correct your spelling
Firstly
fulfill
their basic needs by earning capital. Change the spelling
fulfil
Finally
, the government should ensure city residents move to a small regional location. Linking Words
For example
, it is an article published by The Tribune newspaper showed that approximately 65% of the population Linking Words
of
around the world have satisfied when they shift to Change preposition
apply
country side
Correct your spelling
countryside
areas
.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, Linking Words
although
commoners may not Linking Words
getting
jobs Wrong verb form
get
while
living in big cities and giving high rent to owners of apartments, it can be solved if higher authorities ought to open industries in Linking Words
residentional
Correct your spelling
residential
areas
, they would move to other Use synonyms
areas
and save money which Use synonyms
spends
on apartments.Correct subject-verb agreement
spend
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