The charts below show the number of reasons why some people leave UK and why some people choose to stay.
The pie charts illustrate the argument about why people came to and left the
UK
in the year 2007.
Overall
, it is evident that the main reason
for immigration to and emigration
from the UK
was due to
jobs, while
no reasoning was stated for the exodus and formal studies for emigration
were the lowest in the examined period.
In 2007, it was because of definite jobs that people came and left the UK
. These ranked first,
with a similar figure of almost one-third in total. The formal study was the highest second sense for travel at 26% whereas
it was the lowest reason
for emigration
with only 4%. Accompany or join shared a similar figure, accounting for 12% of the main information for immigration and 13% for emigration
.
Regarding looking for work, there was 12% in the total clue for those who came to the UK
, however
, this
reason
for emigration
was higher at 22%. No reason
stated that made up 6%, which was the lowest reason
for immigration and 18 % of emigration
. The other reasons constituted over 10% of the main reasons to come and leave the UK
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, reason, emigration with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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