The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
The given pie charts illustrate information about
most
common merits and demerits of Bowen Island from surveys of tourists.
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the most
It is clear that
notable visitors say the most common disadvantage is high
cost of living Add an article
the high
while
the most common advantage is the people.
Looking at this
disadvantages chart first,
half of the visitors responded that the high cost of living is the most disadvantage. The second disadvantage according to
the entertainment section stood a
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for a
this
chart. Weather and food quality part stood 15
%, Change preposition
at 15
10
% respectively.
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and 10
By contrast
, 42% of visitors responded that the most advantage is the people. Tourists said the second advantage is that the scenery stood at 35%. According to
this
survey, culture and good accommodation were the lowest advantages rated 12% and 11% respectively in Bowen Island.Submitted by kim88974150 on
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