The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018

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different types of

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and opening stories in one nation from 2011 to 2018. It is evident that the

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opening

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fluctuation but in 2015

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dropped sharply. In 2011 approximately 6,500

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closed.The

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fluctuated over the next four years until 2015

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when there was a dramatic fall in

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to roughly 7000

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.In 2015 the

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of

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closing their doors rose rapidly, reaching over 5000. Between 2016 and 2017 these numbers remained stable and by 2018, over 5000 had closed. The

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of new

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opening declined dramatically from 2011 approximately 8,500 to 2012 just under 4000 but rebounded by roughly 50 % by 2014. In 2015 the

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of openings

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fell to the 2012 level, but

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for the next two years. By 2018 the percentage of new openings fell by 3000.

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was the lowest figure in 7 years