The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
The given line graph compares the two
of
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the
different types of Correct article usage
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closures
and opening stories in one nation from 2011 to 2018. It is evident that the closures
opening shops
fluctuation but in 2015 closures
dropped sharply.
In 2011 approximately 6,500 shops
closed.The number
of closures
fluctuated over the next four years until 2015,
when there was a dramatic fall in Remove the comma
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closures
to roughly 7000 shops
.In 2015 the number
of shops
closing their doors rose rapidly, reaching over 5000. Between 2016 and 2017 these numbers remained stable and by 2018, over 5000 had closed.
The number
of new shops
opening declined dramatically from 2011 approximately 8,500 to 2012 just under 4000 but rebounded by roughly 50 % by 2014. In 2015 the number
of openings them
fell to the 2012 level, but Correct pronoun usage
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stable
for the next two years. By 2018 the percentage of new openings fell by 3000.Add a missing verb
was stable
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