The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018

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different types of

closures

and opening stories in one nation from 2011 to 2018. It is evident that the

closures

opening

shops

fluctuation but in 2015

closures

dropped sharply. In 2011 approximately 6,500

shops

closed.The

number

of

closures

fluctuated over the next four years until 2015

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when there was a dramatic fall in

closures

to roughly 7000

shops

.In 2015 the

number

of

shops

closing their doors rose rapidly, reaching over 5000. Between 2016 and 2017 these numbers remained stable and by 2018, over 5000 had closed. The

number

of new

shops

opening declined dramatically from 2011 approximately 8,500 to 2012 just under 4000 but rebounded by roughly 50 % by 2014. In 2015 the

number

of openings

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fell to the 2012 level, but

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for the next two years. By 2018 the percentage of new openings fell by 3000.

This

was the lowest figure in 7 years