A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in locals newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter Explain what you are currently sowing Describe your suitability for this area of work Say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I have recently read about an advertisement

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your

restaurant

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that was placed for waiters and waitresses in

local

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the local

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newspaper. I am 20 years old. Currently, I am

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a part-time

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student at

university

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the university

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I have

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spare time in order to work all day apart from the evenings. I have been planning to work for

long

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time.

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I live near your

restaurant

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. I am suitable for your

restaurant

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because I study

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psychology. I know how to deal with people.

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, I can speak 4 languages.

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I am good at cooking and I have a certificate of preparation for delicious food. I would like to know when I go

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for

job

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a job

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interview. If you allow me to work

your

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at your

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restaurant

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you will be pleased with me. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Feruz.

dilshod333dSun May 28 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

151 words

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