A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in locals newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter Explain what you are currently sowing Describe your suitability for this area of work Say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I have recently read about an advertisement

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your

restaurant

that was placed for waiters and waitresses in

local

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the local

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newspaper. I am 20 years old. Currently, I am

part-time

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student at

university

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the university

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I have

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apply

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spare time in order to work all day apart from the evenings. I have been planning to work for

long

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time.

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I live near your

restaurant

. I am suitable for your

restaurant

because I study

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psychology. I know how to deal with people.

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, I can speak 4 languages.

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I am good at cooking and I have a certificate of preparation for delicious food. I would like to know when I go

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for

job

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a job

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interview. If you allow me to work

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restaurant

you will be pleased with me. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Feruz.

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