A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in locals newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter Explain what you are currently sowing Describe your suitability for this area of work Say when you can attend an interview

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I have recently read about an advertisement

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your

restaurant

that was placed for waiters and waitresses in

local

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the local

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newspaper. I am 20 years old. Currently, I am

part-time

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student at

university

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the university

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Therefore

I have

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apply

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spare time in order to work all day apart from the evenings. I have been planning to work for

long

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time.

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I live near your

restaurant

. I am suitable for your

restaurant

because I study

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psychology. I know how to deal with people.

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, I can speak 4 languages.

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I am good at cooking and I have a certificate of preparation for delicious food. I would like to know when I go

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for

job

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a job

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interview. If you allow me to work

your

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restaurant

you will be pleased with me. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Feruz.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

151 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in locals newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter Explain what you are currently sowing Describe your suitability for this area of work Say when you can attend an interview

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

As technology has advanced, there is almost no gender difference when applying for any job in any sector. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Some universities students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.