A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in locals newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter Explain what you are currently sowing Describe your suitability for this area of work Say when you can attend an interview

#restaurant #advertisement #waiters #waitresses #locals #newspaper #job #suitability #area #work #interview

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I have recently read about an advertisement

Change preposition

for

show examples

your

restaurant

that was placed for waiters and waitresses in

local

Add an article

the local

a local

show examples

newspaper. I am 20 years old. Currently, I am

part-time

Add an article

a part-time

show examples

student at

university

Correct article usage

the university

show examples

Therefore

I have

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

spare time in order to work all day apart from the evenings. I have been planning to work for

long

Change the article

a long

show examples

time.

Moreover

Add a comma

,Moreover

show examples

I live near your

restaurant

. I am suitable for your

restaurant

because I study

Change preposition

apply

show examples

psychology. I know how to deal with people.

In addition

, I can speak 4 languages.

Furthermore

Add a comma

,Furthermore

show examples

I am good at cooking and I have a certificate of preparation for delicious food. I would like to know when I go

Change preposition

apply

show examples

for

job

Correct article usage

a job

show examples

interview. If you allow me to work

your

Change preposition

at your

show examples

restaurant

you will be pleased with me. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Feruz.

Submitted by dilshod333d on Sun May 28 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

151 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that the Government should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Taking care of health is essential to enjoy life to the fullest. Some people argue that individuals are accountable for their well-being, while others claim that it is the government’s responsibility to keep its citizens healthy. In this essay, both these assertions will be discussed.
5
band
An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment.Why is this the caseand what solutions are possible?
Nowadays consumer goods demand are drastically increasing, as a result, it is inversly effects the environment. This essay will delve into the possible causes and put forward some practical solutions to address this issue.
6
band
Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree with the above notion?
One of the controversial topics today relates to whether people should or should not contribute to the tax system. Although some folks may find it unjustified to be taken a part of their income, I advocate that all citizens pay taxes for the sake of the whole community.
4.5
band
Computers are now the basis of modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However dependence of computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
The bar chart provides information about the world's four major countries namely India, China, the USA and Japan's population from 1950 to 2000, and future predictions about 2050.
7
band
Teenagers are spending too much time on computers and this will lead to a severe problem in their mental and physical health. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Parents often worry about the negative effect of computer use on their teenage children because they spend too much of their leisure time on PCs, laptops and tablets. I share their concerns because the current generation of adolescents is more exposed to technology than ever before.

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in locals newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter Explain what you are currently sowing Describe your suitability for this area of work Say when you can attend an interview

Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that the Government should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment.Why is this the caseand what solutions are possible?

Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree with the above notion?

Teenagers are spending too much time on computers and this will lead to a severe problem in their mental and physical health. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?