Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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education for

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is the most argumentative part of public services, and

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recently tend to have their own opinion about

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topic. Some

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claim that younger

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should learn all

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as mandatory at

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,

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, there are

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who believe it is better to focus on

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which are inside their range of interest or their ability rather than covering all weakness or other

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. I agree with the latter opinion, covering a wider range of

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is not only for making a lot of tasks for

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but

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costs too much budget for running a public

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. The education inequality could be solved though providing classes in all

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,

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can be equal to try and

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they might discover new interests in unpredictable

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as music, and art.

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, for primary

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students

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, classes about music and art are included in the curriculum.

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gives

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to learn and improve their skills with a lower budget because these lessons outside of the

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would charge so expensive. Expanding their interest with lower costs is good for the

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and parents.

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, the budget of public education is quite tight and limited, hiring more teachers, and investing in a variety of facilities to introduce a wide variety of

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must have pressure on financial resources.

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,

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should not spend too much

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studying because

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lose their passion and motivation to do what they are forced to do. If the number of

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increases,

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would be required to stay at

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longer than now.

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is taking their

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for something unnecessary and letting them lose the

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with their family and experience which

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have outside of

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. Schools should teach inside-of-the-basement knowledge for both financial issues and work-life balance. And

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, the mental attachment to

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can influence

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academic achievement is proven by many research. If there is interest or successful experience in the subject, a student would have relatively higher marks. It can evaluate their strength more productive way. In conclusion, giving educational opportunities to

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is not always good for them. Overwork at

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let

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exhausted and have poor concentration in unmotivated

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is just wasting

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. If they or their parents want to have more experience, they should organize by themselves rather than asking for everything from schools.