As developing of technology,
are getting closer to our lives. More and more
spend a larger amount of
in their free
using these devices because of their convenience and useful features.
, I believe that
is a negative trend for human beings, the
spend on exercise or moving their bodies reduces and they are depending on their phones heavily.
, the background of
boosting expansion of
can be reasoned by their characteristics; countless information, ease to use, and multifunctions. The information in search platforms and social media have been updated every moment and they always offer us some entertainment to watch.
, the usage of
is based on free or cheaper than physical activities, which makes
have a low barrier
.
, it is possible to do shopping, watch films, communicate with friends and plan a holiday with the same device, they always have something to do with them.
have easier acceptance and useful facilities which can cover everything we want, And
is enough to attract us for using them.
, endless information makes
stick to the internet and it is difficult to manage their
.
, these are not only advantages but
disadvantaged which are lacking exercise and addiction to
. Working out is one of the effective ways to have a healthy body, but
is prevented by
,
do not need to go out to do something because they can do everything at home with their
.
, some just sit on the chair to play video games for more than 6 hours a day.
, one societal problem is coming up, a lot of
feel so anxious without
. They bring everywhere, and they cannot control themselves. Some students consume their
by spending
with their phones, which causes sleeping and tiredness during classes. When I was a high school student, all of my
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of sleeping. And they were likely to have poor concentration and academic performance
a shortage of rest.
, most of them could not stop that habit, they already relied on too much. The mental dependency on these devices is becoming a huge problem,
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mobile phones has increased.
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and health balance. Not only let
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but
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and dependence on these devices.
,
should seriously and carefully see their usages and situation.