The pie charts illustrate the comparison of the water consumption in three fields (household, industry and agriculture) in San Diego County, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts illustrate the comparison of the water consumption in three fields (household, industry and agriculture) in San Diego County, California and the rest of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the comparison of
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water
consumption in three fields (household, industry and
agriculture
) in San Diego County, California and the rest of the world.
Overall
, the
water
consumption of households in the
two
US cities occupies a significant figure than that of industrial and
agriculture
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portions. Meanwhile, the worldwide
agriculture
water
usage is noticeable as the highest proportion which is a dominant figure than that used by
other
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two
sectors. The
water
used by the residential area in San Diego County makes up a significant rate at 60%
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drops to approximately half at 39% in California.
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water
consumption in industry is witnessed as a second high-rank proportion in the
two
American religions, at 23% in San Diego and 33% in California respectively.
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water
usage in agricultural
area
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just accounts for the smallest amount,
On the other hand
, a dramatic proportion of
water
is consumed by international
agriculture
, which occupies
two thirds
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of the total amount.
In addition
, the tiniest fraction of
water
usage at 8% is used by the worldwide domestic sector. The
water
used by industry reaches 23%.
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