The pie charts illustrate the comparison of the water consumption in three fields (household, industry and agriculture) in San Diego County, California and the rest of the world.
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The pie charts illustrate the comparison of
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water
consumption in three fields (household, industry and Use synonyms
agriculture
) in San Diego County, California and the rest of the world.
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consumption of households in the Use synonyms
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US cities occupies a significant figure than that of industrial and Use synonyms
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agriculture
portions. Meanwhile, the worldwide Replace the word
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water
usage is noticeable as the highest proportion which is a dominant figure than that used by Use synonyms
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the other
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used by the residential area in San Diego County makes up a significant rate at 60% Use synonyms
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drops to approximately half at 39% in California. Correct pronoun usage
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consumption in industry is witnessed as a second high-rank proportion in the Use synonyms
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American religions, at 23% in San Diego and 33% in California respectively. Use synonyms
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usage at 8% is used by the worldwide domestic sector. The Use synonyms
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used by industry reaches 23%.Use synonyms
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