The diagram shows the life cycle of a Monarch Butterfly.
The given picture illustrates the various stages in the life of a
Monarch
Butterfly.
Overall
, there are main 7 stages in the life cycle of a Monarch
Butterfly, beginning with the laying of eggs
and ending with the final stage as the adult butterfly.
The first step of the whole cycle is marked with eggs
that are laid by a Monarch
butterfly on the leaves. Then
, these eggs
hatch and larvae emerge. In the next step, larvae hang and cover themselves with the thread. When covered completely, it becomes a chrysalis.
In the following step is
that the young butterfly emerges from the chrysalis and it destroys the thread. After a period of time, the young butterfly develops and becomes to be mature. At the last
stage, an adult butterfly – known a
Change preposition
as a
Monarch
Butterfly is ready to lay eggs
. The whole life of a butterfly is ready to begin
again.Submitted by mtgngocanh on
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