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The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The purpose of
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 report
to
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is to
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 provide data pertaining to the procedure of processing
tea
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 leaves into five
tea
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 types.
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, the process consisted of various phases, commencing with
growing
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a growing
the growing
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 time of the leaves and culminating in
leaves
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the leaves
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 being dried. The phase starts when the
tea
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 leaves are
growth
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 before they are
plucking
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plucked
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. At the same time, the
tea
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 leaves are wilting in order to produce five different types. In terms of the white
tea
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, after the leaves are wilting, they will be dried in the oven and the product is completed. The process
continue
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 with steaming the
tea
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 leaves. Once people
wilting
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wilt
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 the leaves, they are able to
steaming
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steam
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 and
rolling
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roll
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 them. At the same time, all the leaves are crushed. Regarding the green
tea
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 type, having been crushed, the process ends when the leaves are dried,
which
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when
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 the product can be finished. In the following stage of making others, the leaves go through the fermentation phase in which they can have a slight and full statement. Once
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 stage has been completed, the leaves are dried and
turn
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turned
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 into the
olong
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oolong
long
tea
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, the
large leaf
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large-leaf
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 black
tea
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 and the
small leaf
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small-leaf
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 black
tea
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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