The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
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The maps depict how an area in the centre of Islip town is supposed to transform and develop.
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, a comparison of both maps reveals the fact that the old area will be transformed into a development area as a number of places are planned to be demolished and new ones constructed. At the outset, as it is observed in the planned town map, it is worth mentioning that a dual carriageway is planning to be constructed around
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town centre and some commercial and residential areas will be located in the middle of it. The location of housing and school which are located in the southern part of the neighborhood will not be changed.
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, the park will be rebuilt to reduce its size to make way for new housing.
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, where the main road is located, pedestrians only will be constructed and shops at the bottom of the road will not be changed but shops at the top of it will be developed into a shopping centre including a car park on the right-hand and a bus station on the left hand of it.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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