The line chart illustrates rate of Television and Radio public in United Kingdom during the day in 1992.

The line chart illustrates rate of Television and Radio public in United Kingdom during the day in 1992.
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The line chart illustrates the rate of
Television
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and
Radio
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public in the United Kingdom during the day in 1992.
Overall
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, obviously, the main tendency for
radio
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and
television
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was the same, the percentage of users in both graphics was under one in ten at the start and at the finish of the day. Beginning from 6 A.
M
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., the rate of
television
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enjoyers rapidly grew from almost 0% and
then
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, reached a peak of 30% at 8:30 A.
M
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., dramatically falling to approximately 10% in the afternoon.
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, the number of
television
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viewers sharply decreased and achieved about 2%
at the end
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of the day. The number of
radio
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users, at the same time, rose and fell irregularly, but, starting from 2 P.
M
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., dramatically rose and reached a peak of almost half at 7 P.
M
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. After that, the percentage of
radio
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audiences dropped rapidly to less than one in twenty in 4 A.
M
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. and unchanged to 6 A.
M
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.
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