The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph below compares the
number
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of foreign
visitors
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who visited three different types of areas
in particular
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European countries over 20 years
period
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from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
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, the coast is the most popular area that attracted a lot of foreign tourists in the first year of the survey, compared with the mountain areas that appeared to be the least famous for the most part.
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, the
number
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three areas increased over the
period
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. In 1987, around 40,000 overseas
travelers
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visited the coast of the European country,
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figure dropped slightly to around 35,000
visitors
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in 1992, which began to rise, reaching approximately 75,000 in 2007. Meanwhile, the
number
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of foreign
travelers
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visiting (who visit) the mountains fluctuated between 20,000 and 30,000 during half of the
period
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, which rise
further
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to around 35,000 tourists in 2007. The
number
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of
visitors
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who travel to the lakes of
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country continually rose over the fifteen years of the
period
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, peaking at 75,000
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in 2002.
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,
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figure began to drop significantly in the remaining years, reaching 50,000
visitors
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in 2007.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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