The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below compares the
number
of foreign Use synonyms
visitors
who visited three different types of areas Use synonyms
in particular
European countries over 20 years Linking Words
period
from 1987 to 2007.
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Overall
, the coast is the most popular area that attracted a lot of foreign tourists in the first year of the survey, compared with the mountain areas that appeared to be the least famous for the most part. Linking Words
Additionally
, the Linking Words
number
three areas increased over the Use synonyms
period
.
In 1987, around 40,000 overseas Use synonyms
travelers
visited the coast of the European country, Change the spelling
travellers
this
figure dropped slightly to around 35,000 Linking Words
visitors
in 1992, which began to rise, reaching approximately 75,000 in 2007. Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
number
of foreign Use synonyms
travelers
visiting (who visit) the mountains fluctuated between 20,000 and 30,000 during half of the Change the spelling
travellers
period
, which rise Use synonyms
further
to around 35,000 tourists in 2007.
The Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
who travel to the lakes of Use synonyms
this
country continually rose over the fifteen years of the Linking Words
period
, peaking at 75,000 Use synonyms
visitors
in 2002. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
figure began to drop significantly in the remaining years, reaching 50,000 Linking Words
visitors
in 2007.Use synonyms
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