The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.

The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
The graph below illustrates a system's purpose to collect rainwater for the use of drinking
water
in a particular Australian town.
Overall
, the system is not complex at all, there are five key stages in the process of harvesting
water
for drinking, but it needs to ensure that the
water
is clear enough for humans to drink. First of all, the drainages pipes attached beside the house gathered the rainwater that stays on the eaves, after that all the drain pipes flow into one larger container, from where the
water
goes through the
water
filter.
Moreover
, it
then
flows into a larger storage tank where it is held to control the flow rate.
Nevertheless
, the
water
flows to the
water
treatment tank where the chemical is added to it. The
water
is
then
ready to be delivered via pipes that flow from the treatment tanks to the taps inside people’s homes.
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