The diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagrams show the exact location of the
Eiffel
Tower
in Paris and the structural layout of the Eiffel
Tower
with its future expansion model.
Overall
, it can be seen that, once it is completed, the extension will attract more tourists.
The Eiffel
Tower
is situated between the Seine River and the Ecole Militaire in Paris. The Eiffel
Tower
is a metal structure at a height of 342 m and 10.100 tonnes in weight. The tower
was built with 1,665 steps that can be climbed in order to reach the two viewing platforms.
The second platform has a height of 115 m from the foundation of the structure, which is 58 m taller than the first.These plans include the development of five underground levels that will incorporate the tower
's ticket office, shopping facilities, a cinema and museum, and two floors of underground parking.The five floors will be connected by two vertical passenger lifts on either side of the tower
. In addition
, the floor immediately below the tower
, which is planned to house the ticket office, has a glass roof, allowing visitors to look directly up at the tower
itself.Submitted by maryam.veiszadeh on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words eiffel, tower with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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