Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

In the modern world,

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has increased so dramatically over the past 30 years that increased levels of

traffic

in several cities in the world. From my perspective,

this

statement is true. I strongly think that there are many reasons to decrease using individual

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that government should have measures and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view. One of the most important reasons why people increased using an

ownership

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car

is that using

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car

is more convenient to

work

or travel.

For instance

, if they want to go somewhere, they have the authority to travel anywhere, anytime, they want

while

taking public transport leads to more time than it.

In addition

, public transport is not convenient for people who have children. Another reason to support

this

is the fact that today, the price of a

car

is cheaper than 30 years ago.

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is

due to

the fact that It makes they can perchance easily. These

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show that

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car

plays a major role in

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of

traffic

jams. One of the best approaches

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can take in

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city is to encourage the

work

from

home

.

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,

according to

the latest research conducted by Bangkok University, it was revealed that

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from

home

can reduce

traffic

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. When employees

work

from

home

, they don’t have to commute to and from the office.

This

leads to a significant reduction in the number of vehicles on the road during rush hours, which in turn helps alleviate

traffic

congestion. In conclusion, I would like to say that I strongly believe that the ownership of cars,

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congestion has increased in recent years.

However

, I

also

think that the government should encourage people to

work

from

home

.