Some people think that physical strength is more important fi for success in sport, while others think that mental strength is mort important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion .
The most important factor in
sports
is mental Use synonyms
strength
some Use synonyms
people
agree with that statement, Use synonyms
while
others think that physical Linking Words
strength
is a key point to being successful in Use synonyms
sports
. Use synonyms
Overall
both opinions are particularly true.
First of all, in most types of Linking Words
sports
physical power is necessary for success and can be able to Use synonyms
show
results. The body of Use synonyms
people
can make anything with good preparation. Because of that physical quality is important. Use synonyms
Secondly
, without Linking Words
well-trained
Correct article usage
a well-trained
trainedtrained
Correct your spelling
trained trained
trained-trained
body
sportsmen can not move fastly. Add a comma
body,
For example
, footballers should train every day to Linking Words
show
the expected results in the match. Or boxers should run and train Use synonyms
for developing
their endurance for a fight. Because of that sportsmen should have well physical Change preposition
to develop
strength
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, mental Linking Words
strength
is a reason for having physical Use synonyms
strength
, because without Use synonyms
well
quality and , discipline sportsmen cannot have well Correct word choice
good
trained
, endurance body that they need to succeed in Correct your spelling
well-trained
sports
. Use synonyms
For example
, it is hard to run 20 Linking Words
kilometers
without discipline, or it is hard to train football for 3 hours without mental aim and discipline.The next factor is, in personal Change the spelling
kilometres
sports
Use synonyms
such
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us
, boxing, wrestling, swimming, table tennis or Judo, it is hard to Correct your spelling
as
show
physical power if you Use synonyms
scored
your opponent. Because of that successful sportsman is mentally strong. Wrong verb form
score
Also
in stressful Linking Words
situations
mental Add a comma
situations,
strength
Use synonyms
people
can be more productive. Use synonyms
For example
, boxers could Linking Words
scered
their opponent but they do not Correct your spelling
serve
show
it because of mental Use synonyms
strength
.
To summarise, I particularly agree with both opinions but without mental ,power Use synonyms
people
cannot have physical Use synonyms
strength
.Use synonyms
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