Some people think that physical strength is more important fi for success in sport, while others think that mental strength is mort important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion .
The most important factor in
sports
is mental strength
some people
agree with that statement, while
others think that physical strength
is a key point to being successful in sports
. Overall
both opinions are particularly true.
First of all, in most types of sports
physical power is necessary for success and can be able to show
results. The body of people
can make anything with good preparation. Because of that physical quality is important. Secondly
, without well-trained
Correct article usage
a well-trained
trainedtrained
Correct your spelling
trained trained
trained-trained
body
sportsmen can not move fastly. Add a comma
body,
For example
, footballers should train every day to show
the expected results in the match. Or boxers should run and train for developing
their endurance for a fight. Because of that sportsmen should have well physical Change preposition
to develop
strength
.
On the other hand
, mental strength
is a reason for having physical strength
, because without well
quality and , discipline sportsmen cannot have well Correct word choice
good
trained
, endurance body that they need to succeed in Correct your spelling
well-trained
sports
. For example
, it is hard to run 20 kilometers
without discipline, or it is hard to train football for 3 hours without mental aim and discipline.The next factor is, in personal Change the spelling
kilometres
sports
such
us
, boxing, wrestling, swimming, table tennis or Judo, it is hard to Correct your spelling
as
show
physical power if you scored
your opponent. Because of that successful sportsman is mentally strong. Wrong verb form
score
Also
in stressful situations
mental Add a comma
situations,
strength
people
can be more productive. For example
, boxers could scered
their opponent but they do not Correct your spelling
serve
show
it because of mental strength
.
To summarise, I particularly agree with both opinions but without mental ,power people
cannot have physical strength
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