People’s shopping habits depend more on the age group the belong to than any factor. Do you agree or disagree?
It can not be denied that lifestyle plays a vital role in people's habits for shopping. It is considered that individuals' shopping behaviour is based more on age category. Personally, I agree that life and generation are important factors that have direct effects on shopping attitudes.
On the one hand, the stage of life has a consequence on shopping behaviour. When I was very young, I used to spend a lot of hours shopping.
For example
, I used up a substantial amount of duration for window shopping and bargained hunting just for small pieces of clothes. In addition
, I used to compare shopping but recently, I lead a hectic lifestyle, and I do not have enough leisure time to allocate to purchasing because of that I would rather buy with a shopping list especially buying from the mall which is located near our home.
In conclusion, I believe that dedicating period
to purchasing highly depends on old age and apply of timeframe that everyone has.Correct article usage
the period
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite