Animal testing has become one of the most discussed topics at present. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this experimentation.

Involving living creatures in scientific
experements
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experiments
always had a common practice,
however
, it
still
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most
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doubtful issue in
a
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many discussions. Clearly, making
researches
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on
animals
are prevent
people
from
threat
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threats
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for
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their health and brings more accurate results.
Nevertheless
, there are some drawbacks, that could be mentioned in
such
practices.
Firstly
, testing different products on
animals
is definitely
safe
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and essential step before releasing
it
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on
a
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market. A lot of
people
are buying different goods and even can not imagine which effects it can
brings
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on their
body
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bodies
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.
In addition
, most
of
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items
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for babies, especially, healthcare and toiletry, must be
experemented
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experimented
experienced
on living creatures before, as children are urgent and not accounted for products that their
parent
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parents
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buy for them.
Secondly
, researches on
animals
usually give more correct data, than
another kind
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other kinds
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of testing.Nowadays society still can not
afford
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refuse from using
animals
in
experements
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experiments
, because their participation really helps scientists make more
provent
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proven
and accurate results,
furthemore
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furthermore
, improve
quality
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the quality
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of goods and increase the rate of faith of potential
client
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clients
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.
On the other hand
, despite
of
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effectiveness, the researches like
this
have
their
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own fee.First of all,
implication
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living
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of living
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creatures in
testing
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the testing
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process is completely cruel and immoral.
Animals
are not responsible to suffer only
due to
egocentric beliefs and
own
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the own
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interests of
people
. Another disadvantage is that a lot of alternative ways of testing products
are
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exist and
people
are not limited by
number
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a number
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of opportunities. Contemporary society
have
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already
have
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developed science infrastructure, which
afford
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making
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researches
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research
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on cells and even plants.
Moreover
,
people
should be accountable for
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that they do, hire a team of volunteers would be even more
humanely
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instead
killing
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of killing
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animals
or inflicting them hurt. In conclusion, cruelness and
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the acessibility
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acessibility
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accessibility
of alternative options are the downsides of
hermlessness
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homelessness
harmlessness
for
people
’s health and effectiveness. If corporations become more accountable for their choices and will test their
production
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only when it is
definetely essencial
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definitely essential
, more
animals
will live
peacifull
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peaceful
peacefully
life without any
sorrows
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.
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