Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council, in your letter, - Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre. - Explain the why the centre is important for the local community. - Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.
Dear Sir or Madam
I writing
this
letter to express how I feel about your decision. I feel so confused about your decision it may affect so badly the local people
who live in this
area. To tell the truth, we often use this
sports centre and also
many local people
use it to improve their health.
This
centre is so useful for everybody. Besides
it might affect every age of people
. Most local adults prefer to go to sports centres and they know it will improve their health and active lifestyle.
If this
leisure centre is closed it may affect many local people
and also
give so many problems. Moreover
, most people
will be so fat. If you change your decision , I would be very happy.
Yours faithfully,
HusnoraSubmitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite