The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal beteween 1967 and 2007 .

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carbon dioxide per individual in

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Europe From the span of 40 years between 1967 and 2007 in

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release harmful gas nearly around 3

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emits around 6

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goes up and down from

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1977 to 2007,

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the United

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and the

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hit the highest emission among the four countries in the whole

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. Sweden was at peak around 9

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from 1967 to 1977,

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fall

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from the 1977 to 2007 end at same as

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. Meanwhile the UK has the highest emission in 1967 around 11

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and gradually slammed to 9

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in 2007 over the span of 40 years.

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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal beteween 1967 and 2007 .

It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree.

Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or a negative impact on society?

Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodworking should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family. To that extent do you agree or disagree?