Some people believe school children should help to create rules their schools. Others say teacher alone should decide what the rules are. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Few individuals think school

children

should

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to create

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schools,

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others believe

teacher

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teachers

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alone should decide the

rules

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the sights of both

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make laws

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the

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increase some skills

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also

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how to make

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decision

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help.

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them.

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experience. In my opinion,

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their

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the

children

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should deserve for making

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teachers need to make

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their

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decision

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Some people believe school children should help to create rules their schools. Others say teacher alone should decide what the rules are. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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Technology is being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.