The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs show data about the police
budget
in one area of Britain, in 2017 and 2018.Use synonyms
Overall
, the total Linking Words
budget
was higher in 2018, the percentage of the Use synonyms
money
that was spent on buildings and transport remained at 17% in 2017 and 2018.
In 2017, the total police Use synonyms
budget
was 304.7 million. 175.5m of the Use synonyms
budget
came from the national government, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, the Linking Words
budget
came from local taxes was 91.2m and the other sources were 38m. 75% of the Use synonyms
money
was spent on salaries. Use synonyms
In contrast
, only 8% was spent on technology, Linking Words
while
17% was spent on buildings and transport.
In 2018, the total police Linking Words
budget
was increased to 318.6m, from 3 main streams, the biggest share came from the national government with 177.8m , Use synonyms
while
the least share came from other sources (e.g. grants). The Linking Words
money
spent on salaries decreased to 69% in 2018. Noting that the amount spent on building and transport remained the same. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
money
spent on technology significantly increased to 14%.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, money, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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