The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal beteween 1967 and 2007 .

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden , Italy and Portugal beteween 1967 and 2007 .
The given line graph reveals the tonnages of
carbon
dioxide
emission
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emissions
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in four European countries from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
, the dominant country for
carbon
emissions throughout the period was the United Kingdom, the UK and Sweden showed a downward trend
besides
their counterparts. In 1967, the CO2
emission
weight of
UK
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the UK
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was roughly 11
tonnes
before
this
declined slightly to around 9
tonnes
in 2007. From 1967 to 1977, Sweeden's
carbon
emission
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emissions
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increased moderately and reached a peak at just over 10
tonnes
,
then
this
amounth
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amount
amounts
declined exponentially over the period of 30 years. Italy and Portugal were countries
that
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where
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their
carbon
emissions rose consistently between 1967 and 2007. Italy's
carbon
emission
started at about 4
tonnes
in 1967, after 30 years,
this
increased by 3,5
tonnes
per year in 1977 and protect its position at
rougly
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roughly
8
tonnes
per year a decade later.
In contrast
, Portugal's
carbon
emission
inclined sharply to 5
tonnes
in 1997 and grew slowly between 1997 and 2007.
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