TASK 2 (Academic and General Training) You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved? Write at least 250 words.
While
many struggle to maintain a healthy diet
, it appears that the factors leading to this
situation are very diverse. The reasons behind the difficulty some have to eat well can often be linked to education, behaviors
and social pressure.
Change the spelling
behaviours
Firstly
, not everybody would know what a healthy diet
is. In order to adopt a proper diet
, people have to understand precisely what it means. Hence
, the lack of awarness
and insufficient access to reliable information can be a cause of Correct your spelling
awareness
unehalthy
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unhealthy
behaviors
. Change the spelling
behaviours
For instance
, most of us never received a proper education regarding nutrition. This
issue could be solved by approaching those topics in high schools and companies.
Secondly
, bad habits are another relevant cause. It is extremely hard to modify deeply anchored behaviors
. Whoever is very much used to Change the spelling
behaviours
consume
fat and sweet products Wrong verb form
consuming
such
as candies or sodas, will find it complicated to stop. This
concern is especially valid considering that unhealthy foods are often addictive, whereas
vegetables and fruits appear less enjoyable. For example
, it is proven that sugar can have the same influence as drug
on the human brain. A possible solution to Add an article
a drug
this
concern would be to encourage family doctors and their patients to discuss about
nutrition on Remove the preposition
apply
regular
basis. Correct article usage
a regular
Doing
so, medical teams will have a chance to support individuals on their path to a more balanced food intake.
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By doing
Thirdly
, social pressure can also
affect one's diet
. It is especially remarkable with beverages. It is for instance
very hard to resist to
a beer or a glass of Change preposition
apply
vine
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wine
while
attending a party with a group of friends.
In conclusion, it appears that adopting a healthy diet
requires a relevant knowledge of the topic, a strong mind and an encouraging social environment. Without these, most are likely to fail improving
their nutrition.Change the verb form
to improve
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