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Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening ? what can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced ?

#rubbish #governments #amount
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In the recent age,
people
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 contribute to producing a lot of litter. it is undeniable that the increasing
population
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 affects to rise in
waste
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 production.
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 essay will discuss elaborately the causes and solution of
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 problem. Let’s start by looking at the causes of rising litter nowadays. One of the causes is the
population
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 of
people
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 grow at an astonishing rate and it results in more production of
rubbish
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, particularly household
waste
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 compared to the past. Another cause is
people
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 unaware of
waste
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 management issues. It means that
people
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 do not consider how to manage
waste
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 correctly and perhaps they tend to focus only on how to fulfil their needs.
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, based on The Ministry of Environment and Forest Republic Indonesia report in 2023 the
population
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 of Indonesia growing sharply and have a similar trend with the amount of
rubbish
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. It can not be denied that the rising
population
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 will be affected
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increasing
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the increasing
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 of
rubbish
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. Turning to some solutions.
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 some ways could be taken by the
government
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. One of the best acts to tackle
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 problem
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government
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 should provide new rules that regulate the ways to manage
waste
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 correctly.
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, new regulation not only allows some approaches how to manage it but
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 offers punishment for
people
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 who can not follow the rule. The second action to overcome
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 problem
government
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 perhaps should make a collaborative program with Non-
Government
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 organisations (NGOs) like World Clean Day Up community that concentrates on litter management issues,
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 as a campaign program, and influence
people
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 directly with action.
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, the increase in
rubbish
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 is impacted by the rising
population
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 with low awareness of environmental issues, especially
waste
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 management.
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,
people
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 believe that the rising of
rubbish
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 can be a crucial issue nowadays.
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, it should be tackled quickly by the
government
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 with some approaches that are noticed above.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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