The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

#ethanol #fuel #corn

The process provides information about how ethanol fuel is manufactured

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using merely

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9 stages before it is transported to usage. The first step

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is when corn is stored

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unknown

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it is milled.

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it is cooked for 4 hours using usual water. Next goes,

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it for 48 hours long. And

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into liquid. After that liquid

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to be purified for 5 hours long. The

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is when ethanol is conservated into

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it is transported for any kind

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, ethanol goes through a pretty sophisticated procedure, which takes approximately 5 days to fully be completed. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .. .. . . .. . . .. .

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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

Some people believe that uniform should be made compulsory part of the workplace, some disagree, discuss both view and give your opinion.

Disruptive school children have negative influence on others. students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree with this view

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Many people spend a lot of money on clothes , haircuts , beauty products to enhance their apperance. Some think its a good way to spend , while others think there are other better options. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that car-free days are effective ways to reduce air pollution. However, others argue that there are other ways that are more effective. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.