Your workplace does not have a parking area for cars, and it is causing some problems. Write a letter to your manager and include the following: Describe the problems it has caused. Explain what benefits a parking area would bring to the company. Suggest a solution.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my concern about the situation we are experiencing owing to a lack of parking space for our automobiles. The majority of our company's employees have their own vehicles, which they utilize for official purposes. It is difficult to find a parking space for these automobiles in our company compound.
Employees were on official business, and when they returned to the office, there was no room for their vehicle. They do,
however
, park their vehicle on the side of the road, which is far from our organization. Aside from these, a few employees were penalized for inappropriate parking and parked in restricted areas.
Our job as a reputable firm is to provide room for staff automobile parking, as stated in our office manual. Furthermore
, there is a possibility that automobiles will be stolen as a result
of illegal parking. It may necessitate a reduction in our transportation and have an impact on our projects. There is a traffic jam due to
the parking of vehicles on the road. It not only decreases the reputation of the company but also
affects further
projects.
We sent a suggestion for upstairs parking to the most recent HSE meeting, and management also
sent a notification. Could you please follow up on the suggestion and advise management on how to resolve this
issue? Otherwise
, it causes a slew of problems, which may be detrimental to our organization's reputation. This
situation might result in accidents as well. I trust you understand the situation and are expecting an appropriate response.
Thanks and Regards,
LizaSubmitted by rajipeter3011 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite