Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both sides of the argument and give your opinion.

Human activity has a huge impact on
animals
and
plants
around the world. Deforestation, pollution, and global warming are serious problems caused by human
actions
. Some
people
believe that human activity can not make a major impact on
plants
and
animals
.
However
,they are pros and cons of human
actions
/ on the species. I will deliberate on both sides and try to draw conclusions.
First,
there are several drawbacks of human behaviour
on
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the environment,
For example
, deforestation can cause a series
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problem
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problems
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as some
animals
and
plants
lose their natural habitats. Overpopulation plays a major factor in
this
context. As you know, when the number of
people
increased, that means more land
are
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needed for building homes, so the rate of deforestation would increase.
Moreover
, overpopulation increases the level of pollution
according to
many activities
such
as transportation.
Furthermore
,
people
need more natural
resources
to eat and
thus
increase the demand for natural
resources
. Turning to the other side,there are a few
actions
that could reduce the harmful sequences of human
actions
such
as
people
should be green consumers.
People
should try their best to consume fewer
resources
and reduce the emission of carbon dioxide.
For example
,using solar systems and renewable energy
instead
of fuel.
Additionally
, recycling
resources
would reduce the
overall
consumption of the available
resources
.
To conclude
, there are tremendous impacts on
plants
and
animals
even though there are some
actions
that help to degrade the harmful effects of humans on the natural habitat. I'm firmly opposed that human
actions
could not make harmful impacts on
animals
and
plants
.
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