Q. The government should ban smoking in all public places, even though this would restrict some people's freedoms. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

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lawmakers have to ban smoking in local areas even though

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would limit the independence of some individuals. Personally ,I agree with

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examples in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with the first argument is that smoking should be banned as it is harmful not only

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to others who are near that person . Needless to say , some

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totally depend upon smoking and even they start their daily smoking .

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is because they become addicted and obsessed with it .

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, Ajal Devgn a popular actor , love to smoke every time at the morning and evening and even starts shooting after smoking on the set .

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, the public feel fresh and calm after smoking ,so there would be no restrictions in the public area some individuals might not live long if it bans. Probing

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, sometimes smoking is the best way to reduce stress and stay away from the tension, number of

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give preference to smoking when they are unable to handle the stress level ,

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if smoking ban

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can face health problems like depression and many other mental disorders. To exemplify, normally masses start smoking when you cannot tackle their Personal and professional issues together

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they become addicted to it .

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, the government should not ban it because

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start feeling

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. In conclusion,

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smoke is not good for health,

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I think , smoking is the best way to tackle stress and another problem or

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