Students in a school should learn academic subjects and pass exams. Other skills such as cookery, dressmaking, and woodwork can be learned from family and friends. Do you agree or disagree?
It is discussed, one group of
people
thinks that the only purpose of movie
is to entertain, Add an article
the movie
a movie
while
others believe it have
to be educational.
Many Change the verb form
has
people
watch movies after work just for relaxing or trying to forget about problems. For example
, if you worked hard the whole day, you would prefer to watch something simple, like comedy or sitcom
with stupid jokes. Of course, it Correct article usage
a sitcom
is
Change the verb form
also depends
also
depends on your mood and if everything is bad for you now, you will prefer to watch drama. Moreover
, you may like something that force
you to be in suspense and in Change the verb form
forces
this
way
you will watch detective or thriller. Anyway, all of them watch different Add a comma
,way
kind
of movies without any expectation of deep meaning, unlike another group of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
people
, who need to see more than simple
plot Correct article usage
a simple
while
film watching, something more complicated, which discussed
between critics about its meaning. Add a missing verb
is discussed
Therefore
, this
Change the determiner
these
people
try to watch movies, recognizing some problem
of relations between Fix the agreement mistake
problems
man
and Fix the agreement mistake
men
woman
, policy and government etc. and the main purpose of watching Fix the agreement mistake
women
to
educate Add a missing verb
is to
something for yourself
.
Today the industry of movie production is so developed, that it is really difficult for producers to create something new, Correct pronoun usage
themselves
that
is why Correct pronoun usage
which
thy
try to amaze viewers Correct your spelling
they
making
sense Change preposition
by making
with
unusual Change preposition
of
form
, like ‘Dogville’ by Lars Change the noun form
forms
fon
Trier. Correct your spelling
Fon
To sum up
I would like to tell that in my opinion both kind
of opinion are possible and Change to a plural noun
kinds
film
must be chosen depending on your preference for one or another day.Correct article usage
a film
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion