The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram

illustartes

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illustrates

the manufacturing

bricks

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of bricks

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process for

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the bulding

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bulding

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building

industry.The manufacturing process

take

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ssix

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six

stages. as we see,

First

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the First

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stage

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is digr for getting the

clay

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Second,

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filtering

stage

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they throw the

clay

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into

metal

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the metal

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grid to clear the

clay

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and after that

adding

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sand and water to mix it

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together

with

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clay

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. Third ,

moving

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all the way to

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the wier

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wier

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wire

cutter to get the shape of

briks

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bricks

, and go to the

temlate

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template

.Fourthly they put the bricks in the drying oven for 24-48hrs,Than

thay

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they

have the kiln

who

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which

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has two

heatting

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heating

leveals

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levels

,Moderate 200c-980c and high

leveal

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level

870c-1300c . after

that

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move

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forward to the cooling room,for a period ranging from

48-72hrs

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48-72 hours

.Fifth is

packing

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the packing

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stage

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and

final

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the final

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stage

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is delivery

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

121 words

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