In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.

Nowadays a large number of people believed that taking a gap year for travel or work before enrolling to the

university

is a better idea compared to directly

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the third educational school. There

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beneficial sides

as well as

negative drawbacks and

this

essay will discuss both of

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in

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further

.

To begin

with, exploring their interests and finding themselves are essential advantages of late enrollment

to

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the

university

. Because in truth,

majority

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of students who recently graduated

the

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high school didn't realize their true wishes and dreams

for

this

reason, made a wrong choice which will be regret in their whole life.

Instead

of

this

, having a job is make them more mature

also

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and also

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increases their responsibility,

in addition

, they will find their true passion by exploring various

type

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types

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of fields and industries.

Moreover

, youngsters will earn

certain

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amount of their

university's

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university

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fee

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which is helpful to their parents.

On the other hand

, some of them thought that

the

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tertiary education is not necessary to live and earn money which is the biggest downside. Since they are making

a

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money without

the

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education young adults are losing interest in

high level

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education,

as a consequence

, huge educated human

resource

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will be lost in future.

Furthermore

, they will feel left behind by their peers who are working

as

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a profession which they obtained and it will make them unmotivated and inferior. Because most of them are working not as

professional

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a professional

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job which is basic or

labor-intensive

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labour-intensive

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,

for

this

reason, society seems that not respectable member

also

incomes are too different. In conclusion, working shortly after graduation helps

to

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them not only

finding

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their real interest and passion but

also

beneficial

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to collecting their own cost of study.

However

, on the downside, it will

disencourage

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discourage

them

to

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from

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joining the

university

and

made

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feel them lesser compared to their generation.