In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.

Nowadays a large number of people believed that taking a gap year for travel or work before enrolling to the

university

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is a better idea compared to directly

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the third educational school. There

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beneficial sides

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negative drawbacks and

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essay will discuss both of

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in

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further

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.

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with, exploring their interests and finding themselves are essential advantages of late enrollment

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the

university

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. Because in truth,

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of students who recently graduated

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high school didn't realize their true wishes and dreams

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this

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reason, made a wrong choice which will be regret in their whole life.

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of

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, having a job is make them more mature

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also

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increases their responsibility,

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, they will find their true passion by exploring various

type

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types

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of fields and industries.

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, youngsters will earn

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amount of their

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university's

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fee

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which is helpful to their parents.

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, some of them thought that

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tertiary education is not necessary to live and earn money which is the biggest downside. Since they are making

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money without

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education young adults are losing interest in

high level

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education,

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, huge educated human

resource

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will be lost in future.

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, they will feel left behind by their peers who are working

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a profession which they obtained and it will make them unmotivated and inferior. Because most of them are working not as

professional

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a professional

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job which is basic or

labor-intensive

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,

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this

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reason, society seems that not respectable member

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incomes are too different. In conclusion, working shortly after graduation helps

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them not only

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their real interest and passion but

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beneficial

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to collecting their own cost of study.

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, on the downside, it will

disencourage

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discourage

them

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from

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joining the

university

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and

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feel them lesser compared to their generation.