The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart shows the spending of citizens in different
age
groups in the UK in 2004, containing the comparison of three different categories.
It is clear that
the proportion of spending on Food and Drink increasing by the age
groups gradually while
the other two shows
a disordered trend.
Looking at the information in more detail, older people spent the most in the Food and drink category, making up nearly 23%, Correct subject-verb agreement
show
while
younger citizens spent less. Similarly
, the spending on entertainment rose with the age
from the first group
to the fourth group
but jumped to approximately 12% for the last
group
. In contrast
, the spending on restaurant
and Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
hotel
shows a Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
basically
drop trend with the Change the adverb
basic
age
group
raises, except for the special 61-75 age
group
.
61-75 age
group
show the largest gap in different categories, who spent most in entertainment and spent least in resturant
and hotel when compared to different Correct your spelling
restaurant
restaurants
age
groups.Submitted by 2272219839 on
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