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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables describe how much Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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 and bananas were bought in five
countries
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 of Europe in millions of
euros
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 in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
while
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sales
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 of bananas increased in Switzerland, the United Kingdom, and Belgium and decreased in Sweden and Denmark,
coffee
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sales
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 showed a climb in all five
countries
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 in 2004. In both years,
people
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 in Switzerland bought far more bananas than
people
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 in the other four
countries
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, with
sales
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 rising significantly from 15 to 47
million
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euros
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. Banana
sales
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 in the UK and Belgium went up, to 5.5 and 4
million
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euros
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, respectively,
whereas
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sales
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 in Sweden and Denmark represented a decline, to 1 and 0.9
million
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euros
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, respectively. Only 1.5
million
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euros
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 of
coffee
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 was sold in the UK in 1999;
however
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,
sales
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 in
this
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 country increased dramatically to 20
million
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euros
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 in 2004, which was the highest across the five
countries
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 that year.
Although
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people
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 in Switzerland were the biggest
coffee
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 buyers in 1999 with 3
million
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euros
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 in
sales
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,
this
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 figure displayed a relatively small growth to 6
million
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euros
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 in 2004.
People
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 in Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden bought more
coffee
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 in 2004, but the increase was slight, to 2, 1.7, and 1
million
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euros
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, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, countries, euros, sales, people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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