The table below gives information about populations in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about populations in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the comparative analysis of six
population
indicators in
Australia
and
Malaysia
in 1980 and 2002.
Overall
, the picture provides the total of residents, the
population
of genders, the elder and newborn
population
and the average annual
population
growth.
Initially
, there were 14.7 million Australians and a minor 1 million people in
Malaysia
. In 2002,
Malaysia
grew rapidly 2002 to 24.3 million people
whereas
only 19.6 Australians were in the same period. Both countries' gender was almost equal, but there was a negligible comparison that females in
Australia
were more, and
Malaysia
the opposite. Moving to others remaining,
Malaysia
with a higher birth rate in the period given.
However
, all of them declined during 22 years. In fact,
Australia
started with 1.5%, reducing to 1.3%.
Malaysia
with 3.2% in the initial survey
in contrast
to 2.2% in 2002. Compare to the average annual
population
growth,
Malaysia
(2.4%) was double
Australia
's rate (1.2%) but significantly fell to 2.1%
while
Australia
increased to 1.3% in the next statistic.
Furthermore
, the elder
population
markedly increased in both countries,
Australia
from 9.6% to 12.4%, and
Malaysia
began with 3.7%, coming to 4.3% eventually.
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