The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table data set is a representation of the habits of the non-working British population over the course of the
last
year.
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both genders are keener on taking up activities requiring higher energy expenditure, Add a comma
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as house chores or running errands. Linking Words
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, later hours are reserved for recreation and socialisation, despite the fact that females may keep busy with housework throughout the day.
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, shopping and housekeeping are Correct your spelling
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activities in the mornings, averaging 20 per Correct article usage
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cent
and the latter 19 per Use synonyms
cent
, respectively. The afternoons are set for relaxation with the most popularular activity being reading with 9 per Use synonyms
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and bed-rest as the second most wanted habit. Evenings are with the dominating activity being job hunting both morning and afternoon.
As for the female population, housekeeping, shopping and job hunting are Use synonyms
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for the mornings. Housework average 49 per Change the noun form
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and is the most appealing habit. It is noteworthy that women tend to continue Use synonyms
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energy-demanding engagements into the evenings, if not choosing to dedicate their spare time to watching TV, which is a preferable option with a 12 per Linking Words
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result. Female gender people choose bed rest as the least favourite eveningUse synonyms
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